I've read my share of pitches (hundreds) in my time (decades) as a comic book editor for companies behemoth and miniscule. Here are 9 common omissions that force my hand to scrawl red ink onto your pitch.
WHERE WE'VE BEEN/WHERE WE'RE GOING
Hard to believe we're at the end stages of getting this FLIPBOOK comic to print. When you self-publish, you have to be resourceful since you're basically flying solo.
As you've noticed, there's editing at every stage of making comics. Sometimes the changes are subjective and may seem arbitrary. I do my best to only insist on revisions that will make a huge difference for the story.